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  1. Excellent wordcraft (particularly Maggie’s decline – and I can understand how that would have been painful to write!). Wonderfully visceral imagery. Some very interesting scientific concepts. An implausibly dystopian backstory. Several festering huge plot holes, so much so that my initial quibble grew into a lengthy multi-paragraph rant (which I’ll save for my local fanzine because I don’t want to bloat up your comments section).

    You’ve got a lot of potential, Kary. If you’re able to maintain this level of quality in your execution while putting a bit more thought into your premise’s consequences and implications, and perhaps doing a bit more work on shaping your secondary characters, I won’t be surprised to see you on the ballot in future years even without a slate.

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